Don't wanna be a cradle of your pity,
Don't want you to notice me,
Don't want your fake sympathy,
Leave me alone, alone with me.
Just so tired of this artificial world,
Plastic feelings that everyday unfurl.
Fake smiles, fake tears so ruthlessly hurled,
While the real despise underneath swirls.
Trapped inside your filthy game,
Your rules, your laws, your fame,
Living your life, just so lame,
Suppressing my identity maim.
Just want to escape this life so frail,
I want me to leave behind a trail,
To soar high and away just sail,
Away to my world - My Fairytale!
Let me smile, let me live,
Let me know how to take love and how to give,
Let my soul sing, give me a reason to be,
Just for this once, Let me be me...
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" solitude "??? the latest poem was pretty creative...why don u start writing some short stories? u write with panache...i mean...u can u kno...n thanx for ur comment on my blog...stay in touch...
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"Trapped inside your filthy game,
Your rules, your laws, your fame,
Living your life, just so lame,
Suppressing my identity maim. "
well articulated thoughts.
I love the way you weave the feelings into words. Strange how I feel exactly the same but I won't be able to write these into a poem.. way to go! :)
nice one.. :)
really awesome yaar!!!!
tu itna senti ho senti ho sakti hai
pata nahi tha!!!
ur poems r really awesome...i m sure da 'someday' u want isn't far away...just seek out a way to spread ur talent...few people r as lucky as u to hv an inborn brilliance such as dis...u r a fabulous poet, believe me...and when i read ur first poem...da one u composed at 11 years of age...i didn't find it stupid at all...but i wonder how one can write anything better at dat age...hats off to u...
Pretty and just :)
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